The drafting process was beneficial to my group and I because it enabled us to get feedback on our ancillary products to ensure that we ended with the best product possible to ensure that we get the best grade that I could get.
Advert draft 1:
Advantages:
- Like the typography.
- Theme portrayed is relevant and clear.
- Use of colour is good.
Disadvantages:
- Artist image and representation not clear.
- key info missing.
- Put 'download' ideas together.
- All ancillary need to be consistent.
Advert draft 2:
Advantages:
- Image is abstract which causes a good artist representation.
- Good consistency in terms of the use of conventions.
- Typography chosen well.
Disadvantages:
- Explicit content looks like it is where you download it from.
- Move 'babylon' song so it doesnt go on the artists image.
- Can you make the artist a little bigger to enhance her image.
For our final product, we needed to ensure that our advert we change the position of the parental guidance tag is, Reposition the song Babylon so it does not go on the artist image and make the image of the artist a little bigger to make her stand out more.
For our final product, we needed to ensure that our advert we change the position of the parental guidance tag is, Reposition the song Babylon so it does not go on the artist image and make the image of the artist a little bigger to make her stand out more.
You can see that the group has worked hard in drafting your advert. There are two good adverts that you include and they have been discussed well and critically. Good to see that you have taken your feedback on board.
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